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| Criteria | Rank | Score* | Raw Score |
| Art | #33 | 3.825 | 4.571 |
| Atmosphere | #42 | 3.586 | 4.286 |
| Polish | #48 | 3.108 | 3.714 |
| Overall | #61 | 3.068 | 3.667 |
| Sound | #65 | 2.988 | 3.571 |
| Theme | #68 | 2.749 | 3.286 |
| Gameplay | #101 | 2.151 | 2.571 |
Ranked from 7 ratings. Score is adjusted from raw score by the median number of ratings per game in the jam.
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The art style is beautiful. It evokes a feeling that’s both comforting and heart-wrenching at the same time; it works perfectly with the atmosphere, framed by the everyday life of the house and the mourning. I liked that there were so many panels; visual novels can sometimes feel static, but not in this case. Well done <3
Thank you so much! <3 I'm glad you liked the amount of choices and that the artstyle got the right feeling across.
Thank you for playing my visual novel :D <3
A bent mirror?
Thank you.
Thank you for playing. <3
I absolutely loved this! I was totally captivated by the story--I love the little bits of lore we get about the world and about the MC and Her. I was immediately hooked and felt for the MC. The atmosphere was wonderfully somber, you could just feel the grief in the way she talked about Her. The music really helped with that as well, set the tone very well!
The art was gorgeous as well--I love the contrast between much of the rough, blurry parts to the sharp, focused bits. The minute details on the endings were a nice touch as well! The textbox in particular was a really nice touch.
There were a couple minor polish things that I think you would have caught with more time--I caught a couple small grammatical typos here and there, but nothing major. I did notice the image of the egg on the second and third offering would sometimes revert back to the original uncracked version for a moment and be missing the offerings before they loaded it. Nothing huge though, and didn't detract from the story!
Overall, a fantastic job! I'm left wanting more, it was so intriguing and heartfelt. I can't wait to see more of your projects! <3
Thank you so much for playing it! <3 <3 I'm glad you enjoyed the art and the atmosphere.
And thank you for the feedback! I'll make sure to fix the grammar issues and the thing with the reverting offering in the future :D
Great art, touching story, a great game, well done! I've only played through what seems to be a pacifist ending, haha
Thank you so much! <3 <3
Really good game i enjoyed it alot!!!!
Thank you!! I'm happy you enjoyed it! :D