I'm enjoying the game and I like the fact that it's not just a visual novel but you can actually do some activities too (including leveling up).
Suggestions for improvement: I'm not sure if English is your second language or not, so I hope this won't offend you, but the grammar in the dialogue is pretty rough sometimes. In the bus scene with Luna she says that the main character's dad worked hard to "bring food on the table", it should be "put food on the table". Also, I'm not sure you have used the word "seen" correctly even once. Characters often say things like "I seen this" or "I seen her"... it should be "saw", like "I saw that" or "I saw her". I know that might seem like nitpicking but when I see those kinds of errors it does take me out of the story/game a bit.