While the lack of any description makes it difficult to tie your track to the theme, its emotional buildup makes it great for such a theme. I think the storytelling of your track is its main advantage, and the unexpected acid/techno transition is as great as fun.
I feel like you could make the melody less verbose, especially in the beginning, it would help it make more memorable. If you find yourself struggling with it, I recommend doing variations of a same phrase. Towards the end, I feel like the piano is a but underwhelming for such an impactful motif. It drowns under the other instruments, which is a shame because it is the climax of the track.
Really enjoyed the variety of the sound selection. Though not perfect, it feels refreshing and it's engaging.
Melody clarity 4/5 (sometimes difficult to hear in the mix)
Melody Impact 3/5 (not a melody you'd remember, it's pretty verbose at moments and doesn't develop super clearly)
Composition 5/5
Listenability 4/5 (Some samples where a bit underwhelming, especially the piano)
Correlation to theme 3/5 (no description makes it difficult to give a proper rating)