When you came to the blacksmith to craft some gears :P

May be the melody need more space, i think

Interesting track! Very well executed atmosphere. The percussion sound unique but very good imo! In terms of the jam itself, here are my thoughts:

Melody Clarity 3/5

It actually took me multiple listens to really catch a clear melody? The track is very ambient, and the melody gets lost in the wash so to speak. But it is definitely there.

Melody Impact 2/5

I think the ambient nature of the track hampers the impact somewhat. The melody doesn't cut through that clearly, it's kind of just a part of the track instead of the main character. I think that's as good of an approach as any for a track, but maybe not for this jam in particular.

Composition 4/5

The track in it's entirety is well done. I love the percussion, and think the track develops nicely and tells a good story.

Listenability 5/5

I listened to this one many times! A very pleasant experience.

Correlation to Theme 3/5

I've given this same criticism to other tracks already and I start to feel like a broken record haha, but I feel like out of context this track does not feel related to either the painting, or the theme of a weapon? With your description however this really falls into place, this fits the birth of a galaxy well.

Good job on this one! My favorite thing was the texture and sounds used. There could have been more focus on the melody, but on it's own I still think this was a joy to listen to!

Very cool! Feels like being in a scifi-esque factory or watching the weapon get constructed. Aptly named.

I enjoyed the percussion choices you made for this piece. It really gave the feeling of being in a busy workshop while the baseline carried me through the experience. Nice work!

Really great atmosphere, maybe a bit too chilled out on its own for the Weapon Of Legend theme to me, but the melody is really nice and just the whole overall track has a great feel with the groovy bass and rhythmic percussive elements.

Good work!

I really like the low fidelity textures behind this. It takes a large step away from the more orchestral feel a lot of folks went with this Jam and instead creates a more ambient and darker tone both thematically, sonically, and mix wise. I think it's also far from the "Weapon of Legend" motiff the Jam had, but it's incredibly consistent with the rest of your work and really works as a strong commercially viable track.

Great work.