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Thanks for the kind words! I think you have  a point there with dropping the percussion out for a bit. I will  play around with ideas some! Thanks!

Alright! Hello fellow Yuki track title participant! I am really enjoying the textures you got going on! Am I catching some reverse bells in there? And then that piano drop at 1:10 while taking out all the noise, absolute cinema! Then a synth pad with an attack follow up! I really enjoyed your track, thanks for creating!

Solid track! I like how it progressed harmonically and melodically and all the variations. I felt the track built upon itself and fit the theme really well. Thanks for sharing.

Hey! You are doing more than step 1 here! I am assuming the other "The real goat' submission is you as well? Yeah, keep exploring and creating! Thanks for sharing.

I am having a bit of difficulty on how to approach this listen. The track sounds like an initial idea and then tabling that project. To me this is step one competed on a many step process of creating a track. I am not an expert in anything so please don't take my comment harshly, I am always happy to talk with people about their process. All that said, this is a fine step 1, you could craft a song out of this for sure I think. Thanks for sharing!

There are some really nice sound design and instrumentation things going on here I think! I feel some of the ear candy things are sitting a bit out of pocket and too forward in the mix at times, but I still think they are really cool musical ideas. Thanks for sharing!

Some really nice energy and musicality! I will agree though, more clarity in the mix and watching out for clipping would have elevated all the great things you have going on here.  Thanks for sharing.

I am with the other comment, I really like the sound font you got going on! The forever exploration of sound design! What a lovely journey. Thanks for sharing.

Well done eerie atmosphere here. I think the instrumentation works well and the mix is very clear. I like that you moved the ostinato around some, I think that helps elevate the tension and make things interesting. Thanks for sharing.

You have crafted a mood fosho here! I think it could have been fun to try develop the theme rhythmically a bit as the song progressed or varying the registers. But enjoyable nonetheless. Thanks for sharing,

Ok thanks for the reply! I will give a listen!

Oh!!!!! I debate making the linux jump about once a week! Do you find that anything available on windows runs in linux?

I am noticing a real mix of interesting machines at work in this jam. Whatever you are using it sounds great! I really like the textures, that ominous bass is scratching all the needs I got. I really like the ambient tubes like percussion fluttering about. I really enjoyed this your track, thanks for creating!

Nice vibes, I like the detune part way through, thanks for sharing!

I am in a bit of an agreement with Grunt. maybe with some harshness. I really like the synths for the most part you used and I think you used them well and fitting. Maybe a envelope on attached to a filter could keep the identity to those synths in the attack but shave off some of the harshness in the sustain so they don't clash with each other as much. Other than that well done! Thanks for sharing.

You got a vibe here fosho! The high end was a bit harsh for me, I do have baby ears when it comes to that sort of things though. Some lovely timbres though, reminds me of 80s/early 90's Japanese dubs in anime. Thanks for sharing.

All right sax on the beach! Appreciate the video and watching the process. Really nice energy in this track, thanks very much for sharing!

I appreciate the variety and evolving textures in the track. I think that is a great way to elevate an atmospheric track and keep it interesting. I really enjoyed your work, thanks for sharing.

I really appreciate the different colors you used with the piano.  It seems to me you have a very firm craft of song writing here. Really enjoyed this track, thanks for creating.

Yeah I am with the other commenter, you made a strange juxtaposition of timbre with music that works surprisingly quite well. Thanks for sharing. 

Oh my gosh, thank you so much for putting an LFO on your background texture. The movement was so nice! Instrumentation ascending this track! Really well done, thanks for creating and sharing.  Also! That the instruments also vary which beat they come in at, so good! I really like the small things you put into this one.

All right you had me at the horns in the start and some nice wobble detune piano. There is a lot of personality in transitions and totally different vibes that are still coherent to the track. At the 2:38 mark the mix and electric bass got out a pocket for me quite a bit. I feel like you're onto a good idea there, maybe just need a bit more time to find where everything fits in that one part a bit more cohesively.  I really enjoyed this one, thanks for creating and sharing!

Nice vibes. The track was a bit muddy in the low end for me. I could make out all the instruments just fine, I just wish I could hear the attack of some of them a bit more. The attention to sound design was nice, hearing the attack I think would elevate it even more. Thanks for sharing! Caught some Vampire Hunter D vibes! The first one....the retro one.

I like the use of detune and wobble!

I am getting some really nice 90's vibes from this track. Thanks for sharing!

I am with the other comments. Banger, indeed! Thanks for sharing!

Really enjoyed this track. The EQed intro into a high energy open EQ mix was great. The subtle things like someone taking a breath as a transition sound were awesome, too! Thanks for creating and sharing.

Is this DAW a programming script situation? Nice track. the flute MIDI voice was a bit overpowering on my end, nothing too serious. Don't know if a bit of EQ or just volume adjust could help the mix a bit with that one voice. Other than that solid vibes, thanks for sharing.

I think you have crafted a perfectly functional track! Melodically and harmonically everything works well, I wish there was a bit more texture in the instruments' voices. Are you using stock instruments? Would be nice to get a bit of dialogue going. Thanks for sharing!

I think you got some really nice texture through the interactions between your instruments and their voicing in the beginning. The progression into the mid section was seamless and very atmospheric. Then into these pulsing driving E-piano? maybe? was a really nice texture in the background that elevated everything.  I really enjoyed this track, thanks for sharing.

Lovely track! I like the energy and personality in the instrumentation and rhythmic variations. I think a better timbre on the bass voice could really elevate this song into being amazing. I think the notation and rhythm of the bass is great, I would love to hear some texture in the bass voice itself though. I really enjoyed this one, I really think you have quite a developed ear and craft for instrumentation and form. Fun listen, thanks for sharing.

Nice track. I like the small tonal clusters at about the half way part and change to double time at the end. Thanks for sharing.

Nice tight composition. The melody is memorable and the harmonic progression follows along with a mood! Thanks for sharing.

Oh!! I wanted the drop! Nice energy building up and I appreciate the panning. Thanks for sharing.

You have a command over harmonic progression there! Sounds like a solid movement 1 leading to the storm of movement 2!  Thanks for sharing.

Ohhhh detune! You are playing into my preferences. I am feeling some similar harmonic and timbres to that one SNES Donkey Kong track. Lovely textures and wonderful track, thanks for creating!

Sorry is the track 17 seconds long? 

Nice tracks! I enjoyed your instrumentation around the pedal piano musical idea. I think you crafted some very driven harmonies.

Hey! thanks for the comments and sorry I am slow to leave feedback in return. Solid music, I really enjoyed it! I like how the pockets of counter melodies between the lead guitar. Also just all the instruments that are syncopated in the small rests the guitar leaves. I am pretty envious how natural you can make the track flow. Thanks for sharing!

Really cool entry. I think there are a lot of little decisions and creative things going on that really elevate your tracks. At times it sounds like there are only a few voices at play but the tracks still sound full of depth and other times many instruments and high energy and there is still space for subtle details to shine. It feels like a lot of things going on that I am glad I try to listen with intent when going through the submissions and not just listen to these in the background. Few things to mention real quick, an erosion on a ride cymbal with a slow LFO attached to the frequency? Syncopation between instruments? And a progressive detune on the reverb while you seem to keep the main voice free from that? So good. I highly enjoyed your music and thanks for taking the time for the little things.