I am having a bit of difficulty on how to approach this listen. The track sounds like an initial idea and then tabling that project. To me this is step one competed on a many step process of creating a track. I am not an expert in anything so please don't take my comment harshly, I am always happy to talk with people about their process. All that said, this is a fine step 1, you could craft a song out of this for sure I think. Thanks for sharing!