This is wild. Casually dropping a 1980s fantasy hack in two columns -- what do I even say? I'm stunned.

I'm afraid I don't have much feedback for you. I don't see this taking 2-3 sessions, but I guess Warden-styles and session lengths will vary. In the miscasts, is it intended that miscasts can reduce stress? Gaining stress seems like it might be more on theme. There are a few places I'd add capitals in the Loadout lists, and I think Ammit and Horus could both have been fleshed out just a bit more. But then again, it's a pamphlet, and it's already jam packed with great stuff.

Very neat! I'm excited to see what you do next.

I FUCKING love the wild move to set a MoSh module in the 80s! Excellent guidance on how to make that hack as well, with a whole new class and a great set of loadouts present to make it seamless. Nothing else I'd need and it makes me want more 80s adventures. All-in on the Egyptian mythology means I can't give anything but full marks for theme, I dig it! Creatures are effective, locations are interesting, and the setup is high-concept but decently digestible! My my pain points would be:

• I feel like the interior color scheme/treatment is very successful, and the exterior panels black/red/silver treatment could be swapped to match it. Some text in the statblocks especially might be a bit too small for print?
• There's a lot of buildup to the festival, so I felt a bit thrown off that the palace doesn't get a section of the map of its own + that the description of the finale is in the Horus NPC block.
• I was a bit confused by Dmitri's background as both a Soviet and a demigod. It seems partially explained in the Horus statblock (if you win the festival you become an avatar of the gods/some kind of ascension?) but a bit more of a centralized primer on what the deal is might be of help.
• The QR code web app is helpful! I did notice it reprints rules text from the PSG, though, and it's important to note that the 3PP license does not allow this. You can reference the name of a panic/wound entry, but not reprint the mechanics. Also would love to see potentially a Human Made label on the app (my paranoid ass + 3PP licensing, not at all a dig on your work)!

All told, the quibbles above are not huge and the vast majority of this I feel is thematic, exciting, and different. Huge respect for your work here, excellent effort and well done!

This looks amazing, really cool premise and setting and detailed mechanics. On the game page (not in the actual PDF as far as I can tell) there is an instance of "THOT" instead of "THOTH" that, while humorous, should probably be corrected.