Thanks for the feedback, I really appreciate the kind words & constructive criticism! We'd love to make a full game of this, we were considering subtitling it "pilot" or "prologue" because it definitely feels like a vertical slice of what a full game of this could be.
Fun fact for the dialogue being poorly translated, this was an intentional decision. Our team played a lot of Touhou 7 during the beginning of the week for bullet hell research. I felt like the story had some unique charm in how the translation was very literal, and like you had to read between the lines of it. I was hoping to achieve something similar with this! But it might have been a bit out there of a choice to make, I'm not sure if I'd keep it for a full version of this game, haha. But I'm glad you noted it, it's definitely what we were going for. :D