Art: The art direction here reminds me of so many sci-fi brothels it immediately engages me.

Writing: I feel like I've only seen one other Mothership product breaching this subject, and I gotta give you props not just for going for it, but being respectful while still keeping it aware of how horrific it can get. Really glad you kept consent at the front but still acknowledge that coercion is not impossible.

Game Design: The map & icon design is a lil difficult until I get to the bottom bar where the icons are. The legend could be in a more visible place, but that's just my 2 cents. Otherwise, it's concise and I can still work really well with it.

Theme: While this doesn't utilize myths in the traditional sense, it does give me strong vibes of Circe's island, especially how the guests can be stopped from leaving by pleasure or power. Art imitating life and vice versa as it were. 

Layout: The layout here focuses more on information delivery than presenting the vibes of the place described. 

Utility: This feels ready to go for either Shore Leave or a module. I would need a couple read throughs, but not a whole lot of work Warden side! 

Favorability: I enjoy modules that broach this area of pleasure/vulnerability, and in the past I have seen this area done badly. This is one of the best ones I've seen in a while, and the extras included supplement everything included beautifully.

This is good shit, and I think a worthy inclusion in the Triptech jams! 

Art: Outer panels are all really nice, inner spread is less appealing overall, though the map icons are nice.

Writing: Good concept, as long as everyone in the group is both okay with it and capable of roleplaying this kind of thing without being creepy about it. The writing is decent overall. Clear enough, a little bit of character development. Maybe more explanation needed of Iris's ultimate ambitions? Is it just to make ever-more-irresistible nymphs to make more money for her club? I feel like I'd want to have her running a honeypot spy network or blackmailing corporate execs or deploying robot mistresses to manipulate politicians. Depending on the PCs' preferences, might be too gendered... where are Satyrs? Some typos in the menu: pinnaple, whine.

Game Design: Everything works, I think. If I'm going to quibble about anything, it seems highly unlikely that anyone's going to find the password on the inside of the cat's collar because what reason would they have for removing it?

Theme: Aside from naming the sexbots "nymphs" there's not a whole lot that's mythical here. It's not a stretch or anything, you did the theme, but it's only integrated in a superficial way.

Layout: Using directly-connected location text boxes instead the usual map-and-key saves space, but is the reason the interior spread isn't as visually interesting as the outside. I'm not sure what you did with the Nymph/Security stat boxes is the best idea. Maybe put all those in one place and assign them to locations with an icon system like you did with the doors/stairs/corridors, instead of the dotted lines.

Utility: I see no serious barriers to just dropping this into a campaign and going.

Favorability: I think it's good. Wouldn't use it because when I'm roleplaying these days I'm usually running games for my 13 year-old son and his friends. If I did run it, I'd work it into a bigger plot about a spy ring seducing VIPs.

I always am in need of shady locations and this is ideal. Highly usable, great mechanics for a downtime location or an adventure. Bringing the colour palette together a little more could be good, but that might just be a matter of taste. You have made an evocative location and packed with useful details, this is one of my favorites in the jam, great work!

I was worried given the subject matter, but this is tastefully done and the theme mostly serves as interesting set dressing. I think it is realized well and this is a solid module, but I think I would have liked maybe a twist or subversion. Though maybe it's better for a shore leave setting to be a little more straightforward.

Also, the collar puzzle solution may be a little too obscure. Maybe I missed a clue, but I think it may be hard for players to know to take the collar off. 

All-in-all though, this is well-executed. I agree that the second page needs more of the personality of the first page, but it still looks good.

Hell yeah. Now THIS is Mothership. Think you're getting a sexbot lap dance at a fancy gentlemen's club? Well NOT TODAY, bucko!

The font makes it a bit hard to read, but it looks good and I think it'll be a good time for the degenerate players out there.

To start with, visually the first page is great. The cover art is awesome, I love the menu design, the art on the front fold is killer. I love the names of the items on the menu and the build a nymph is very clever.  You did a great job of integrating an ancient myth into a sci-fi setting. The second page is, I think less visually appealing, but is very playable. All the information you need is clearly laid out and on the page and the design is accessible and gives us everything we need to play a session. From a color, font and "feel" I think the second page could be revisited to make it feel more like the inside of an erotic club. Perhaps you could incorporate the curvy neon light lines from the front instead of the hard right angles and flat colors? Or they could be more cord like or S&M themed. I don't know. 

I personally haven't run an overtly sexual adventure at my table (which is three couples), but I think the hook of rescuing someone from the testing chamber would completely work with my group without anyone being put off in any way. I think you've struck the right balance on a tricky topic where it would be fun for most people is what I'm trying to say.  Great job! 

Its a cool idea, a downtime location that draws the characters in to relieve stress but has a kind of modern sinister AI seduction racket going on. I found the menu on the back pretty unreadable, a script font at that size, light on dark was a challenging decision to justify. Some of the writing suffered from strange arrangement and could have been more brief and more evocative, though overall I like the subject and how it was presented. I am stoked you chose the Nymph as your ancient myth, its a classic and doesn’t get enough play in adventures. Solid entry.

With erotic themes, striking a balance between horror, deliberate allure, and care for player consent at the table can be quite the challenge. I believe this does a fantastic job with expectations from the cover onwards! Nymphs, sirens, and beguilers are so iconic that the theme really spoke for itself and what follows with "The Operation" explanation and hooks is fantastically ripe for Warden development. 

While in theory, short, this has a lot of potential as a location with complications and if not should be a memorable experience for tables that will appreciate and responsibly engage with the content.