First of all, the writing was absolutely excellent. From the very beginning, the atmosphere and dialogue established a strong sense of mystery that immediately pulled me in and kept me eager to see how the story would unfold.
My one critique is that the ending leaned a bit too heavily on exposition to deliver the plot twist. I know that approach works for some readers, but I personally prefer when those revelations emerge more organically through the narrative itself. That said, considering this was completed in just a week, it’s completely understandable.
Overall, though, the presentation was exceptional.