Hello! I’ve noticed several typos:
Column 1 & 2 (General Solo Rules & Examples)
- “consol” instead of “console”: In the first paragraph, it reads, ”…If my pilot’s consol had lit up red…”.
- Punctuation splice / Run-on: In the second paragraph, ”…roll 1d10. If the opposite is true, and your character reacts to situations rather than being in control of them. You are getting further…” This should probably be a comma.
- In the RECORDS section, it reads, ”…but the kep ingredient is that all the rules…” instead of “key”
- In the THREATS section, the text reads, ”…on average, every ery three scenes…”.
- In the THREATS section, the sentence ends with, “This should both increase risk an the it should move your story forward.” This contains a missing “d” in “and”, an unnecessary “the”, and poor sentence structure. It should likely read: ”…increase risk and move your story forward.”
Column 3 (Sidebar / Summary Rules)
- In the OPEN QUESTIONS example paragraph, it reads, ”…The storage is full of black markets hi-tech gear.” It should be ‘black market hi-tech gear’ or ‘black-market hi-tech gear’.
Column 4 (Tables & Final Section)
- In the CENTERPIECE section, it reads, “The centerpiece should try and capture the essence…” but should be “try to capture”.
- In the final paragraph under THE END, the second sentence reads, ”…If an imaginary director would call “Cut!” and the screen fade to black…” should be “faded” to match the tense of “would call”.
If you decide to publish an update for these, I’m wondering if you could also offer a page-by-page version, in addition to the spreads.
Thanks!