There's a groundwork for a pretty good story here, but unfortunately since it's only the prologue that's out, there isn't much of a plot yet. I liked the beginning with Adarna's tale and the wolf prince, and I can kinda see where the story is going. It's just that I would have liked to see a bit more of a metaphorical representation of the folklore told through the characters. But the only similarities as far as I can tell is that the wolf and crow are gay for each other. And that's... pretty much what the whole story is. It's nonstop gay panic, with some snippets of an interesting historic subplot. Basically, every single interaction between the crow and the wolf can be boiled down to "we're friends but omg he's so hot but he doesn't know and i can never tell him". Maybe it's a tad unfair but at this point I'm getting tired of the gay panic trope, and I was looking for something else to happen, some more character depth, more of a narrative hook I guess? To be fair, this is only the prologue so there's plenty of time for the story to develop in a more interesting direction, but for now, meh. At least I can appreciate the handmade visuals, especially in the beginning. The sprites are also cute enough, though they could use more expressions (and actual feet, since the sprites fly up quite often and it's weird seeing their footless sprites jump around).
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That exhaustion over the nervous MC because the love interest is just "too hot/cute" is very much valid, and I still blame not thinking at the start on how they would develop, rather, I focused on the other half of the story after the prolouge which sucks because the one that would be seen by everyone is the prolouge and if I were to show the other half then it wouldn't make sense and not make the end impactful, still I thank you for taking the time to check out my work!