Hey I'm Kotorewa, the translator here!
Thanks for pointing out these few mistakes. No matter how small they are they will all be gone in a correction patch that will be released somewhere in August ^^. The translation this time around didn't have a correction. Usually after I finish translating another person (and/or me) goes through everything; sentence by sentence, at least two times – this wasn't the case due to the time limit.
Since you've taken your time to point these out I'd like to inform you that most of these mistakes are noted and will be fixed in the future, except for one.
"Because love you can" – you're absolutely right that it's grammatically incorrect but it's a stylistic device chosen by the writer themselves. It's a switch from the classic word order SVO (Subject-Verb-Object) to OSV (Object-Subject-Verb), I like to think of it as yoda speech.