Hot, cute, old man fuck yeah. It's a good read. I'm expecting horny stuff, I get horny stuff, and I think it's done alright. Very porny in how "All of a sudden, everything that's the usual is causing us to inexplicably come close to each other." The implementation of the theme is very minimal, dedicated mostly to the LARP scenes, and even then, the mention of it was limited to a few lines of dialogue in the introduction by Harvey and when he and Ezra interacted on the tree. I don't have other notes other than my brain going, "Danger, why is he telling you to be more open while both of you are in the shower?" But I took a quick re-read, and the conversation was fine. 2, 4, 4, 4, 4.