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Generally, the quality of this game really rise from episode to episode, but in chapter 2 episode 1 the text use the "it's not this, not this, but this"-structure a few times too many. If there is AI input it's not at all obvious, but I've grown so allergic to slop that I read it into things that is just slightly too close in style. If you would try to generally avoid that specific stylistic choice, of saying what something is by saying what it isn't, I would appreciate that.

Cheers and thanks for a nice game, and you've had an amazing development in skill! 

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I chose this specific rhetorical structure to help boost the episode's poetic side a little bit. But if it's a common AI structure, I'll try to avoid it as much as possible from here on out. Thanks for the heads up!

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Thanks! Yeah, I figured, and if it wasn't for that AI overuse I would have enjoyed it a lot! Bloody AI ruining good things. Once in a rare while is all good!