Really good. It was a nice and easy read. The central message was pretty blatant and predictable, but the story works well enough for what it is. The characters are very well defined, immediately making an impression upon their introduction. There's a strong and intriguing narrative hook, Bonet's creation and even all the logistics involved. There's some fun experimentation with his range of knowledge. The story then shifts to the other characters, and we get to see the bakery grow. Of course, it's obvious that Rosso is digging himself into a corner, and at some point everything needs to come down. And fall apart it does. It's definitely a relief that the hot dilf bear was there to pick it all up. Ultimately, the ending was again predictable but still sweet. I liked these characters a lot! Though I'd have liked to see more scrutiny into whether Bonet's existence is like, moral and all that. It was the most interesting thing about the beginning, then never really got touched on after that. But I can understand how that would end up being a question with no answers. Regardless, even though this story was kept simple, it's still very sweet. The visuals are impeccable as well, especially the cute CG cut-ins. The writing honestly could have been better but I understand that the native language is Portuguese and thus the translation into English was pretty good, considering. All in all, a very solid entry, good on all levels.