That was so fkin hot.
It was a nice read, can't stop thinking about how arousing it all was tbh. But for other matters, the implementation of the theme was done well enough, simply "What I knew was a lie all along!" which I think is there for more flavor on the plot, but not in a bad way.
Story is good as well, ngl I kind of thought this was going to be some kind of werewolf story lol. But I got quite intrigued by the world, like a less technologically advanced Earth while the more advanced ones are on the moon because of something bad on the planet, apparently. Would be interesting to know, but probably unnecessary. Poor Clive, though, he got cucked by some stranger from the moon, and the only guy who probably cared about him is going up there, now he's even more alone outside. Also really? A held shirt just flies away? Also, when you say no pants, apparently even the sprite shows no shirt. The writing needs some spelling checks, though.
The art was very nice, me likey, a lot more novel than visual, but the visual parts look very nice. (Did I mention Lucius is very hot. And made me kind of compare him to Silver from RTF, but more bulky. I just like Silver. But Solus was cute too.) 3, 4, 4, 3, 2.
P.S. Lucius is so hot like wtf, idk how this got me blushing.