I liked that, it was good read, yay for yuri and also, another ghost hunting but one of the characters (or more) actually don't want to do that anymore. Not a bad thing, just a funny coincidence. And I don't have much to say because all worked pretty well, but I'll say some anyway.
For the theme implementation, the plot revolved around the folktales of various places, and even more interesting is that anxiety-induced visions, that was an interesting way to show the creatures and people. I just simply thing it was done well.
The story was ooooh... It hits pretty right. Though at first I was like "Another nervous wreck MC?" and "Why do you like her wth, why did you risk your life for this channel???" But the way it was reasoned out was so good. I could feel the frustration Lilah had with the choices she made, and understand that yep, feelings can just be like that. Maybe signs that Valentina does like her a lot earlier would be neat, but I'll just count them as neat coincidences. Also Trent is now the third wheel pfft. OH YEAH THE INTERNALIZED HOMOPHOBIA, I think it was written good as well.
For the presentation my goodness, a lot of art on this from bgs, to sprites, and cgs as well, and they're all very cute. It does what it needs and me personally, I'm satisfied.
The writing, I guess there was one part with "rubbing my hands for friction" was a bit too long, but I justified that with Lilah being a nerd and need to enlarge sentences essay-style. But overall I don't think I noticed any issues with the writing.
Overall, it was a good read, yippee for wlw. 4, 5, 5, 5, 5.