I've only read the first two chapters, but I can already say that this is one of the most interesting visual novels I've read recently.
I love the characters, their quirky behavior, and the overall storyline. Although the visual novel isn't very popular yet, I hope you won't give up on writing it, as you have a great talent for storytelling.
Unfortunately, I can't financially support the project at the moment, but I will definitely recommend it to my friends. Thank you for creating such a good story! :)