Pretty much what Aetherpixel said before me. The progression is stale, the theme is confusing when compared to the jam's theme, graphics just feel like assets thrown in a vortex of chaos, music was ok but sound effects were a bit awkward and very repetitive and uhhh, i don't exactly know how to rate seriousness but i don't think this is it.
Overall: 2/5. Some aspects of this have potential but need to be cared for better. The game just feels extremely generic now and doesn't really have a soul, but the ideas are there. Keep improving and you'll make nice stuff! :)