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| Criteria | Rank | Score* | Raw Score |
| Audio | #2999 | 1.521 | 1.800 |
| Seriousness | #3051 | 2.113 | 2.500 |
| Creativity & Theme | #3053 | 2.028 | 2.400 |
| Overall | #3230 | 1.775 | 2.100 |
| Visuals | #3239 | 1.690 | 2.000 |
| Enjoyment | #3245 | 1.521 | 1.800 |
Ranked from 10 ratings. Score is adjusted from raw score by the median number of ratings per game in the jam.
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Godot
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This was cool! Some of the audio mixing maybe could have been better, a couple sound effects were so loud they were like jumpscares hahaha. But I liked the cute little story, and the riddle was surprisingly clever lol. Great job!
thanks for playing the game and give this beautiful comment < 3 thanks
Some thoughts: I’m not sure if all the ortographic errors and syntax problems are on purpose or accidental, but they are too many to feel polished and intentional either way. Lack of punctuation, no commas, no question marks, words that have too many or too few letters, everything in lowercase… and it happens in every dialogue bit. To be quite frank, it seems too playful to even let me stay focused. A few of these could maybe work, but everything needs to be done in moderation. After the 4th dialogue in a row with many errors and sentences that are hard to read, it gets tiring.
Well, and now I’m stuck. I wanted to pick up the spinner but I can’t. Whenever I try to, the lady tells me to fix the things she asked me to do. And I can’t leave the room without bringing my spinner. So I think I’m stuck. Something isn’t working as intended?
I would try to figure out what might not be clear here. I would explain to you what’s unclear, but it’s hard to tell when I also don’t know what I’m supposed to do. I just know I went to the desk and pressed “E”, just like it says there, but I didn’t pick up the spinner. I also don’t find anything else to do in the room except going to the doors.
ithink i t was simple english no need for extra grammer , if you read the dialouge she clearley say take the spinner from behind the table it was a little joke not funny one but it was a joke , thanks for playing the game < 3
Gently, I can see the same mistakes are being done in this comment, so I think it wasn’t intentional in the game. It would be a good idea to get a proofreader next time, as clear and correct language is important to make a game clear and enjoyable, and not some extra thing one can just ignore. If it’s not your native language, it’s super understandable. And I’m sure you’ll also do better in time! It’s a matter of practicing.
Regarding the spinner, I’m not sure what’s wrong, since I tried to take the spinner from several points. I may have missed it in the dialogue, though, because as I mentioned it was hard to follow and required much more cognitive effort than if it had been written without any errors. I think it would help if you’d let us take the spinner from the front, as well, and provide an outline for assets that can be picked up when we can pick them up. This will signal to us a clear cue about its interactivity.
Maybe I’ll try again later to grab the spinner and see what the game has to give past the start! Good job and good luck in future projects!
I really like the ball minigame, even if it’s a bit janky, and the dialogues certainly got a couple giggles out of me!
I do feel like the riddle really only pointed towards a single number (though I’m bad with riddles)
The fidget spinner throw was actually really cool and well-made in my opinion, I do wish it got more use though. Overall I really like this small game! Very charming.
thank you for taking the time to play it < 3 all love
actually thats the point , you just need to solve the puzzels not fight, when you fix the clock it will parry for you when you fix the fan it will kill for you , i think the clock puzzel is not outside information it was very clear and funny for my pov plus its not a ball its a bay blade .............. dont even try to think its a ball although thanks for playing the game and spend the time to try it ,all love
Very charming, although the controls are a bit unclear
yeah i think it would be better if i wrote the controlls in the itch page , thank for trying the game