There's a lot to love about this! There's a really cool idea here that I could see being expanded on. I love the art style and the way Petri kept sort of popping around the house. My favorite detail was the little bit of confetti left behind on the objects after you interact with them. Clearly still in a demo state, but there's a lot to be proud of here. The vibes are immaculate. Great work!
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Proper Working Order's itch.io pageResults
| Criteria | Rank | Score* | Raw Score |
| Seriousness | #264 | 4.000 | 4.000 |
| Creativity & Theme | #369 | 4.000 | 4.000 |
| Overall | #462 | 3.700 | 3.700 |
| Visuals | #609 | 3.812 | 3.812 |
| Audio | #762 | 3.312 | 3.312 |
| Enjoyment | #860 | 3.375 | 3.375 |
Ranked from 16 ratings. Score is adjusted from raw score by the median number of ratings per game in the jam.
Game Engine
Unity
Comments
Great job on the game! I enjoyed it, and the mechanics were really good!
Great stuff datchcole!
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Spiral of VengeanceLoved it, felt creepy, even tho i was expecting it to be even more creepy! Nice “minigame” and story, deserves more attention!
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Reel WorldVery, very interesting idea. Had the feeling of being a horror game at start but the final part of "fixing lose screws" was brilliant. I actually got kinda nervous of seeing a jumpscare at the end lol. This actually sparked some ideas in me.
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Lil' Ghost Goes For A SpinI really like the atmosphere you were able to achieve with the sound and visuals of the game. There's so much potential here! I can also see an element of horror being added that would fit the style of the game. Well done!
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Fox Gotta EatI liked the concept, great game. It would improve a lot if you could visual feed back, like the camera zooms in on screwdriver and shows more that the screwdriver is spinning. Overall I liked it
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Dial For Dear LifeNice game, I like the concept. I could see this being a cozy satisfying narrative game with a bit more polish and content. I could also see the narrative going in an indie horror direction, which would fit the artstyle. There's a lot of potential here!
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Spin to SpaceThis is a lot of fun! I tried playing it on my laptop which is very much not a gaming laptop, and regrettably couldn't get too far due to performance. I love the visual style and especially the music. Petri is captivating, I want to play more. When I get back to my house on the 8th, I might try to play through again :)
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Date RouletteVery epic work, music is right up my alley as well. Definitely want to see it developed more, has tons of cool potential for story building and maybe a horror aspect. Very impressive and creative, nice work! :)
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COLD STATIC: PrologueI like it, i like the music and it feels like a cozy game, like Unpacking but repairing things, it would great this game but with more tools.
There's a bug in the wall by the stairs that made me fall out of the house, but I went around to the front and was able to get in through the main door.
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TEKTONIK RUSHI accidentally broke the game. I was walking up the stairs and somehow I clipped through the window and fell out. I couldn't get back in through any entrance, so I just wandered around the abyss. Besides that it was quite a nice game! For a proof of concept I found it interesting. I also didn't expect the table glitch to be that weird, but that's besides the point. The full game will definitely be something I'm interested in.
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