I hate everyone, except Colin, he needs someone actually empathizing? Caring about? I don't even know... But it's great, I am now in immense dread because I wish I knew more. I've seen your art for Novembuck and I never got to read it, but now I read this, and I am astounded. (added after reading other reviews) IT COULD BE NOT METAPHORS??? OH. OH... SOB. I'M SORRY FOR ASSUMING. But I could even be right in my thinking that it could be, but I immediately went straight to assuming it is. But also now I see it's regarding possibly the Bermuda Triangle, it makes sense now with the location. How did I not think of that... It has been a while since I've heard mention of that.
For the theme, I could say it has the nature of folklore, 2 moons, vampiric occurrences, things disappearing, as it could all just be a metaphor for something as well. And based on what I read somewhere on the fvn server, I think you mentioned something about how people did say such things, and let me just say... Fuck them, fuck whatever they said. And I hope things are well for you if what I read was right. I don't want to be rude and assume your condition I'm just grahhhh so mad at whoever was with Colin because they sucked.
The story, like I said, it feels very folkloric with how mystical things are going, with some goal in mind. But that goal wasn't reached and I just felt so *pain* /pos, I wish I understood the metaphors more. I felt so immersed while I read I had little to comment because I was taking in moments.
The presentation is amazing, theres so much art made for this, especially with it being animation wow. Then the audio, it kept me nervous because I was trying to anticipate what might happen later, I don't know I just felt such dread about all of it.
The writing, also amazing, maybe could use some fix ups with some parts, I don't know what "victimistic (sic)" means, and one "through" had a capital on the T. But overall it was good.
All 5s on the board.