Absolute cinema, I cried. Absolute peak! That was beautiful...
The theme was implemented perfectly with the (I guess optional) DnD and folkloric theming using Arthurian legends. The story was amazing, it flowed amazingly, the cuts to the butterfly were kind of confusing but then I understood in the end. I was confused because I wasn't sure how to handle the butterfly saying on whether that butterfly was real or not. But still oml I'm unsure on what exactly that type of thinking is, but I relate and understand such feelings Tyler had and it was just... I want to shake him and tell him things will be ok. Like the opening, very peak, and the end, also peak, what a moment for tail wagging and being all sweet and stuff URGHHH, that "I love you" hit me like a truck and that truck parked itself properly in the end.
The presentation, let me just say props to the bg artist, all the painted bgs are so pretty. Then the music, love me some music that gets you into the mood of the setting.
The writing, I don't think I saw any problems and flowed so well. I don't know what else to say, I just love it, one of my favs. All 5s on the board!