Thank you so much for taking the time to write all of this! I'm really happy you enjoyed the game. ^^
Thank you for pointing out the bugs. I'm working on fixing them! The pronouns are taking me a bit longer because I'm still trying to figure out where they are. As for the game closing at the end of Naky's Day 2, that's because of a bug that sends the player back to Naky room afterward... and I still haven't figured out how to fix it properly.
And don't worry about the long comment—I really enjoyed reading it. Thank you again! <3