Hm... gonna be blunt, this story had a weak beginning. It felt like it was going to be the traditional meet cute story where the romance progresses way too quickly and the characters don't feel like real people at all. The CGs were nice enough, but there just wasn't anything to make this VN stand out. That is, until they decided to go to the elementary school play. That really is a fucking weird place for a date, man. But then Tom showed up, and the story finally got interesting. There's suddenly a lot more to get invested into, such as the fact that Ren might not be such a good person after all. Even when he gets back into the romantic groove with Lucan, it remains interesting because Lucan's naivety starts to become more significant and there are actual stakes now. It's a bit of a shame it ends right after it got interesting, but that's a good sign that you should continue this. I'd love to see where the story goes from here.