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Hey there friends!!!

Remember me?

( I the one who send you game call ice tower :).. Funtime-party-crown-circus too )

( edit heere I might give you a long text.. And there might be some error.. where I might said something Dosen't make sense.. If that's happened.. I am sorry for that.. I try my best to make sense and be honest as much as I can.. And being positive too.. Also I hope these feedback I sent to you or something like that... Dosen't hurt your feelings.. I just want to see you improve.. Doing so.. I be honest.. But I also be positive too.. So take your time reading.. And I hope you like it!!! )

Is been a while

Isn't it?

I have 3 I think best one I made so far

But before I share to you

I want to give you feedback on your new games

Know if I have to compared to your first to new games

Is improve a lot more

I give your games first ( which call is Neve na distancia - Snow in the distance ( or Snow in the distance for English name version.. I think? ) a 10/3

Because there some pros and cons about Snow in the distance

pros at Snow in the distance

The game looks nice!!!

( is like the game looks like a 16 bits.. In good way!!!.. And Colors fit pretty good at this games!!! )

Story is pretty interesting?

( I don't fully get what the story of this games try to say.. But is pretty interesting.. To teleport around the place to tell story )

Cons

( There not really game play.. Like Yeah.. There some story.. But After that.. There not much to do.. There no win or lose at this games.. ( I know there house you go to.. Where.. I think you beat the game?.. But I don't know if that win scene.. Since you just teleport back after you press z ).. Which big problem for someone who likes to come back to game for game play )

Also

There either

( English language to read at one of them En blown colors text? )

And others

I think is different language ( Bn blown text )

( Like probably Brazil language )

Be better if player can pick one of them language at main menu

( and Stay that way.. Unless player changes at main menu )

And also.. 80% probably Brazil language around the game ( even if you didn't pick that That.. And that problem.. Because I have no idea what the game say to me.. Even though might be something cool.. I might miss it.. Because I don't know anything about Brazil :) )

And sounds effect would be nice

I give it 10/3

Because of looks this games looks pretty nice

Plus

The way the game tells story

Is pretty interesting

( Even although.. I wish I could understand it )

( Oh by the way.. The music in this game is pretty good :D )

Plus.. This is your first game jam

So.. I don't expect to be best games ever

But overall

Pretty okay start game jam

Not the best

But can work with some improvement

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Know let's talk about your new game call is Yuri is a Bright Spark... Whose Fuse Never Lit ( Or for short name.. Lets call it Yuri for know )

Know this game

Improved some things than your first game

Let's start pros first

Pros:

I like how you're ears is main focus

And there 3 minigames

One them is pretty interesting

( I think you have to hear if the sound loud.. Or not.. If not.. Then you can press space )

I do kinda like it.. But dose have problems

But I say it when we come to there

There 2 minigames

Where you have to listen which star sounds coming from.. And whatever you hear star sounds coming from.. You need to press opposition keyboard

( like for example.. If star sounds play on left.. You need to press right keyboard.. But.. If star sounds play on right.. You need to press left keyboard )

( So basically.. Every time you hear sounds.. Star coming from right.. Or left.. You need to press keyboard the opposite where star come from )

Is pretty interesting idea

And the game looks pretty nice

( Even though.. You can see only few things.. ( Like for example.. At main menu.. And purple glow things.. It shows when you start game.. Is either be headphone.. Or star.. Or more )

Although I can't remove points just for not showing much

Since this game jam is about hearing main focus than seeing

So I wouldn't judge for it

( Also by the way..my favorite part is the cat jump that person.. And that person said.. Get off me!!!.. Or something like that.. I find That part kinda funny!!! )

( Plus The game over scene is pretty interesting too.. Not going to lie :) )

Here some things you improve your new game from your first game

You pick language at the main menu ( Instead inside the game.. Which is way better doing this way.. And less messing.. In my opinion :) )

Game play is improved too ( Like there actually game play.. Where you can lose or win despite how you play.. There story too.. But main focus is game play.. And to me.. Is more improved than a first game.. Because game play is more important than story.. At least to me :) )

And much more clear.. And less mess than your first game ( Like is clear what Is your goal.. In this game.. Like.. At first game.. You just follow story.. But it is kinda confusing.. Especially when there others language.. And.. Is kinda unknown if player doing rights or not.. But in this game.. Is much clear what is your goal.. Know what I understand this game.. I think your goal is to cut off bomb.. Or something like that.. By completing the game at 400 second.. While also You need to make sure to avoid getting any wrong choices.. Or else.. You lose 10 seconds.. It is very.. Important.. To save time.. Especially to the end of game.. And the idea is pretty interesting.. And game play can be fun )

However despite that.

The game is not perfect

There was some cons too

Like for example

Cons:

1 I still don't fully understand

( Like..voice person acting.. Wasn't 100% clear What try to say.. even when i try to read text.. I still feel like Little bit lost.. I think most of time.. I was either guessing how the game work.. Or I try to understand the game by myself by just simply.. Playing the game.. Know lucky.. The game was kinda simple enough to understand how work most of the time.. However.. Dosen't mean we should just avoid that problem.. To avoid text being little bit confused ( Or voice person ) try make English more clear and understand it ( Especially at important part.. Also.. Dosen't have to person read English better.. Since I imagined that be very hard.. And that fine!!!.. Dosen't have to be person.. Really.. As long I can read text.. And understand it.. I don't see a problem ) I think best is do is.. Make it more more clear.. Try make text short as much you can.. And try make it English main focus( if player press English language ) .. Since I still see some other languages )

Know as for minigames

Well.. They have some cons too

Let's talk about them

2 minigames is not 100% clear

( like the first one.. Was kinda clear.. I think you need to do is.. Listen deep sounds.. When you hear deep sounds.. You need to press space.. That at least I think how it works.. But.. When come at the end.. Is kinda confusing.. Like some sounds is not 100% deeply.. Yet.. Is still count?.. Or something like that.. Like I don't know.. Maybe make it more clearly.. Instead of this..

It is pretty okay minigames.. But could be better )

( second minigames.. Could work.. And I think is one my favorite about this games.. This 2 minigames Is basically about you have to listen where star side comeing from.. You have to press keyboard to different where star coming from.. Is pretty interesting.. I was confused at first.. But once I figure out.. By try to understand the text.. And play the game to figure out myself too.. Is start to be fun.. However.. Sometimes when I hear.. Star made sound to the left.. I press right..or.. Star made sound to the right.. I press left.. The game say wrong.. Even although I suppose to do that.. By press opposite where star coming from.. It can be pretty confused if player didn't figure out they need to do that in order to win..Is either bug.. Or sound star make is not clear.. You might fix if any these problems in the game.. Because this mingame is pretty fun once you understand.. Despite being some problem there )

( third minigames.. Is.. My last favorite part about this game.. And reason is that.. Because.. It feel like completely luck.. Know I could be wrong.. And could be because I didn't understand how it works.. But Dosen't means i won't share my problems with the games.. Know phone guy ( the one try tell you how to play to every minigames ) tell you you need to keep press keyboard ( left, up, right, and probably down ) and keep do That until I win before time run out.. Know that sounds pretty simple.. But the problem is.. The time you have.. Move fast!!!..like very fast.. Meaning if you little time at the end.. Is pretty much game over.. Know If that was only problem.. I won't have problems.. But there more sadly.. Remember I said the 3 mingame make you just key press keyboard where you just hope you getting somewhere.. Well.. That is problem.. Because time moves so fast.. And you literally just keep press up or down or left or right keyboard.. Hoping to succeed beat this game by luck.. Because there no way to tell if you close to exit or not.. Because.. Literally almost everything is black .. Time moves way too fast than necessary.. Dosen't make it better either.. Which I am not big fan of it.. Because There pretty much nothing you can dk.. Other than keep press keyboard.. Hoping you can win by luck. And before you ask.. Yes.. I know if you continue keep press keyboard.. You might get somethings where time.. However.. It pause for like few seconds.. While also time moves extra fast.. So I don't think that's will help Either way.. I think if you maybe add 3 mingame like.. If you hear something very close to you.. You have to press left mouse immediately.. Something that focus on skill.. Rather than luck.. Which is reason why I not big fan of it. Because this part of this games.. Focus on luck more than skill.. And maybe make pause time more.. And slowly down fast time.. Because believe in me when I I say try to beat this game.. But no matter time.. I always lose at the end.. Because of some cons.. Where I lose some time in this game.. Because is either clear if I did it.. Right or wrong.. Or not.. Which can be feel unfair when you playing this game... And not 100% if you doing something wrong or the games.. And more problems I said before.. And maybe add more than 400 seconds.. Because I do feel like is little time for me to check if is right one or not.. Especially when is the time very important at the end )

But over all

Is pretty good game :)

Despite what I Said minutes ago

It is pretty fun game

Where you need to be careful and smart be about it.

Otherwise is game over if you just try finish the game as fast as possible

( Especially if you have little time )

Yes

Is not perfect game

It dose have some problem

But improved way more than you're first game

To game play

And more where you improve.

That why I give your Yuri game 10/5.5

The game dose have some moments game where the game is pretty fun

Is just need to improve some things.. And fix some bug

( Like when I press enter immediately at the start of the game.. The phone call didn't go away immediately.. You might need to fix that )

And maybe add something new or try improve more than first one

( Especially at last minigames )

And game be good to go!!!

Know I done giving you a feedback and more

I want to show you 3 protect where I truly proud of!!!!

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First I proud of call kill or be killed Mario exe game!!!

I not 100% sure if you did play the game or not

If not

Please check out!!!

Is game where I truly proud of

( Not just because of the game is scared.. But also because game play.. And so much more )

So if you haven't play the game yet

Try out right now!!!!

You play it on ichio ( by downloading )

/jam/scream-jam-2025/rate/3891747

Or play it on gd.games ( Where you can just play It immediately without downloading :) )

https://gd.games/fnaf-fan/kill-or-be-killed-mario-exe

( Also I might make Sequel of this games.. Maybe :) )

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seconds I proud of call mystery box jumper demo

I proud of game ( Because of endless fun mode.. Where enemies and more )

Although

Is not exactly finish demo

I was planning to make more to this games

But didn't because of time for this games jam

But I still like you to try to out!!!!

You can play in ichio ( not exactly )

/jam/gdevelop-big-game-jam-9/rate/4605331

Or just play it in gd. Games

https://gd.games/fnaf-fan/feefs-

( Since is kinda only way to play.. I guess )

( Plus is not public at gd. Game .. yet.. Because I don't think Is finish enough.. Or something like that make me release it to public.. But I don't mind a you trying out!!! )

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The third I proud of is call invader Jimmy

Know this game.. I really proud of

And I think is most special one ( And maybe my best work I ever did )

I won't say much of this games

Since I want you try out first before anything

But all I have to is.. The reason I made this game is both for fun.. I the show and movies call Invader Zim!!!

I pull a lot time and effort on it!!!

I hope you like these games I share to you!!!

I hope the feedback helps you!!!

( and I really appreciate for feedback.. And rank 3 my game for 10/10.. Or something like that too!!!.. if you can!!! )

Honesty is welcome too!!!