This was some neat dialogue practice, I don't want to judge too much because of that, but I'll still give some comments, or maybe this just wasn't for me.
No theme implementation, not much to mind there. Story is focus is nothing much to note, but I will say the conversation between Wonder and Mirth are pretty good, but I just *Wonder* how dude is 26 and haven't had cable but streaming, and Mirth is 31 but incredibly very boomer, maybe I'm judging without context, but there's not much context to get so I'm left to assume. Also there was one misspelling of "whether" as "wether." Other than that I'm going to give it a 1, 2, 3, 4, 2.