Hi! Looking for any feedback on my campaign Dead Yet Dreaming, which can be found here:
https://ninvis.itch.io/dead-yet-dreaming
Unfortunately the formatting is super fragile and can really only handle comments right now, but any suggestions would be greatly appreciated!
Right now I’m looking to:
- Find things to cut or trim (would love to get the page count down more, though not quite sure how yet).
- Find a better title. I’d like it to be DEATH WAITS DREAMING or something referencing The Call of Cthulhu, but that might overlap with the second scenario, DEATH MUST DIE. Open to suggestions.
- Find any way to make layout more distinct and clear. Right now it’s very Call of Cthulhu / Delta Green aesthetics, but open to alternatives.
- There’s a few highlights where I haven’t quite nailed down specifics, i.e. a book name, what a ritual looks like, and so on. Minor stuff I guess.