Nice! Two suggestions from me, the platforming feels very floaty because of the low gravity, I think if they fell a bit faster and had coyote time (so you can still jump shortly after running off a platform) it would feel a lot more fluid, and the dials lighting up when they're in the right place took away some of the challenge, maybe you could do something with audio there?
In any case the poem was a nice read, good job submitting this game!