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| Criteria | Rank | Score* | Raw Score |
| Narrative | #6 | 4.688 | 4.688 |
| Artwork | #508 | 4.250 | 4.250 |
| Creativity | #1212 | 3.969 | 3.969 |
| Audio | #1361 | 3.469 | 3.469 |
| Enjoyment | #1955 | 3.500 | 3.500 |
Ranked from 32 ratings. Score is adjusted from raw score by the median number of ratings per game in the jam.
How does your game fit the theme?
It's about the last few hospital visits you have with your brother, its a countdown to the last visit. This is the obvious part that fits the theme but there is more worked in.
(Optional) Please credit all assets you've used
I made all the assets but the sounds come from pixabay.
(Optional) What would you like to be called if GMTK features your game?
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A simple game with a touching story ! I'm glad your game and mine share the 6th place. Guess we both had an important story to share. Good job !
I am glad as well! I will make sure to check it out :)
At last, "You" were able to say i love you. After saying the last goodbye to him
This is beautiful.
A small detail I personally love is how every day, your character ends their conversations with "See you tomorrow." You get used to them saying it, even though your brother doesn't say it back. Then on the last day, expecting those same words, you get hit with "Bye." instead. Not from your character, but from the brother. Like he knew he wasn't going to see him tomorrow.
Beautiful game.
Wow. This game feels personal. The writing feels kind of like a form of poetry mixed with authentic conversation. I was going to criticize the lack of capital letters and punctuation, but I feel like that was intentional. The game looked great while staying simple, and I don't think I've played a game that manages to be this good with this little gameplay. Only gameplay critiques are that if you don't skip text, it can take a while for the z prompt to appear. The text reading out also looks a bit strange if there are multiple lines. I feel like the text would look great with a few more effects like speed and maybe a little shaking, but the way it looks isn't what this game is about. Amazing story, great job.
very emotional btw
very nice art i love it
oh wow
I cried.
Such an amazing story!
Damn. I thought I would prefer only games, but this was very emotional. Nice work!
Did not expect something like this in a game jam, now I feel sad
I didn't expect to get emotional on this Jam, great work!
I cried... life is so short!
I cried... life is so short!
very simple yet impactful! wonderful art style. thank you for sharing this :)
Really well written, loved how real the dialogue felt. Great job at getting such an impactful story in such a short amount of time/gameplay.
Packed a punch into a short experience. Well done, thank you for making it.
It's impressive how well written this is, and how much you made me feel in such a short time. This was an excellent entry.
Hit Hard but beautiful 10/10
Thank you so much, truly!
love the entire story and also just the design in general!
Thanks that means so much to me!