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Interesting text based narrative game, I like the concept used here! The multiple endings and choices do bring in some replayability but I think the text scroll speed being slow unless you press Spacebar (which is an odd choice) does hinder players trying to go through it again. I think you could've handled the colors used better as sometimes text uses red but other times the buttons also use red, etc which causes confusion on what is a button and what is simply just labeling. It's UI design rules which is important when the majority of the game is simple text.

Overall, cool game idea!

Thanks a lot for the feedback.

Formatting the UI correctly was one of the things I needed to learn this time around, and Ive got a bunch of feedback regards to that, So I should hopefully do better with it in the future.

The space bar I agree was a bit of a weird choice. I've already got a post jam build with mouse and space bar to skip, so that should be clear.


Thank you for playing!