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I was about to say “nice story” but I guess it might not be the most precise description! Well written stuff and cool text effects that still stayed reasonable enough that I could read without struggling. Which is of course important in a text-based game. For full accessibility, being able to disable the wavy effect on the font would probably be a good idea. But it was great that the story always waited for me to give some input before continuing. For me personally I could have had it typing out the text a little faster, and especially for replaying the game it would be nice if I could skip forward to branching points I’ve visited or at least make text reveals near instant.

I’m glad that I replayed too as the first ending I got was sort of the fast/bad ending in a way. Well I guess that there were several bad endings, maybe only bad endings? I would have liked to explore that a bit more but with the text reveal speed seemingly fixed, I didn’t have the patience for more than two runs.

Play-through with more comments:

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Just finished watching the Gameplay, Thank you so much for doing so!

I agree with most of the feedback and I definitely should add those sometime in the future. Speeding up the text is a must need at this point, Space bar to skip is just not intuitive(which is in the jam version). And better text formatting. And a toggle for text effects.

You actually got the more better ending of the game, the actual good ending is one that was left in development by me(forgot).

You did speak a bit about the story itself, which I am not going to be able to comment on elsewhere - Some background context is that the Casino is actually run by the Corporation that buys your life. As such you get pamphlet next morning.

And once again for the detailed feedback and the gameplay video as well, that is much appreciated!