Seems like it needs a little proof-reading just to make sure everything makes sense... room numbers, can get to every room, etc. But, overall, I like this adventure quite a bit and can see its potential. The mix of sci-fi/fantasy is done well. Cover is awesome!

Great cover art. But could need some tweaking on the layout and just proofreading again to make sure its all good.

There are some nice science fantasy vibes in this one.

Love the cover. There are some nice science-fantasy vibes going on here for sure. You're losing a lot of real estate on your lefthand margin because of the list inset. That's easy to claw back.

Great vibes. Bare but serviceable layout. Mistake in room #2 makes reference to nonexistent room #9 instead of #6. Map lists south door to #4 as locked with no key to be found (intentionally missing or just oversight?). Room #5 listed as #6 on map. Treasure being attached to two 1:6 chances means there’s a good chance PCs will leave empty handed.