I quite enjoy the map and the choice to use a photograph for the cover was a really neat one! If I could leave some feedback, it's that the choice to use black text over a blue background made it less easy for me to read. I do like the yellow circles for the bullet point numbering though. Those really stand out.
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Thank you! I am 100% going to revise for readability after the Jam based on everyone’s feedback. I appreciate the feedback. I also plan on polishing the map and adding some more collage photos like the cover for the “weird” monsters. My map last year was more polished aesthetically, and I want to build on that. Did you mean the game design aspect of the map or the look? Also always like to ask if there’s a weird or (meant to be humorous) element that does not fit the tone?