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Great job with your first page. The ripped cover and the handwritten notes really sell the vibe.

I would love a description of the surface or Europa at the start, though. It sounds icy? 

A nitpick about key 6, when you have a paragraph continuing to the next page, its helpful to put a (cont.) at the end to inform the reader there's more on the following page:

The spacecraft appears cut in two by the dome. (cont.)

In 7. Talos' Home, a Con test that becomes a potential one-hit kill is pretty brutal. I'd probably change this if I were to run it. Also, would be good if there were clues on how to convince Europa hidden throughout the other locations.

I love the Revenant triggers being emotions. That's a really cool mechanic. 

Overall, the layout and design is clean and easy to parse, and the adventure nails the Appendix N theme, well done.