always happy to see more mountain resonance. really well executed escalation throughout the adventure. it's been interesting seeing how many entries have players restricted verbally in some capacity, i didn't anticipate my adventure being the only one, but i certainly didn't expect this many.
this is one of those entries where i feel like it's hard to offer pointed feedback because of how consistent the vision is-- that anything i'd offer could potentially tamper with that. on first read through i thought that the 5th segment could use a more pointed conclusion, (not necessarily that the melody needed to be one thing or another, as all the potential sources are fantastic) just as a bit of guidance for the Warden. buuuuut after letting it sit for a bit i get where you're coming from by leaving it up to the story that emerges from the scenes organically.
will be thinking about "a fucking-fighting phased couple" for awhile.
great work, looking forward to more.