So… you took the apostrophe in the assinged title and ran with it without ever looking back, did you?
This is a great location and premisse. My players will absolutely choose violence, guess I’ll prepare some backup characters :-D
I think the zine could loose lots if the first and second page as some things are explained multiple times. The locations themselves could benefit from a bit more space for fleshing out.
I felt like it was the only way to do the challenge justice. I also think it took me in a much more creative direction than I may have gone otherwise.
Yeah, I think you're spot on. I want to slim down the intro, maybe add a brief prose intro like I've seen in some other submissions and really enjoyed, and expand on what could be found in The Library Tower, The Hostel, and The Talon's Private Tower (particularly the last one). I definitely repeat information which is an artifact of editing while trying to meet the deadline. I should have managed my time better in the middle of the month. Something I definitely want to clean up going forward. Thanks for reading it!
