It's an interesting twist from the title, and I enjoyed the plot, even if a bit convoluted. My only doubt, judging from experience, is that this seems a really deadly adventure, good thing you prepare 8 pregen, but still the frequency seems really high. The layout is cool, but the differents fonts are a bit hard to read, I had to pause quite often. I would suggest a printer friendly version with a single, high-legibility font.