There is lots of great content here, but could use some revisions to distill it down to the best parts as it was a little hard to follow. The descriptions are a little verbose, but its well written and the lore and items are really interesting. The idea of a folding dungeon is really cool and I feel you should showcase it more up front (I was confused at first by the map fragments on the front half). I would love to see you expand on the mechanic, its such a great idea!