I started reading this because I was searching the NSFW tag as well as seeing a comment that there will be NSFW erotic scenes in the future, but DAMN I am so glad I started this. Reading this made me feel like I was reading Echo for the first time again, and I mean that in the best way possible! This VN really got me feeling dread while reading it. I'm really looking forward to future updates!
My only comment would be it feels like the horror is happening too fast. The MC just got there and immediately horror elements start happening. It was doing amazing with just the setting being unnerving and planting seeds of horror for the future, but with what I assume are supernatural/psycological aspects, they seem to happen in such a short time, as in the story just started. Unless this VN is on the shorter side then that would be alright.
P.S. I really hope that Mippi has a route!
Thank you so much for the kind feedback! We're glad you committed to reading even with only the promise of spicy scenes to come! Strikes is currently stoked about your comment.
Indeed, the project is intended to be on the shorter side (actively battling scope creep as we speak lol) as it started out as a way for us to learn about the VN-making process. We are always looking at our pacing, and as the project goes on we are considering possibly filling out some parts to help with that. We're glad to have some confirmation from the outside! I hope you continue to enjoy reading as more updates come out and we look forward to hearing more from you in the future!
W Mippi enjoyers
~Alba