This is so well made! It got a mystery and drama. It is laid out well and seems like a very scalable one- or two-shot: A party could speedrun into the mine or spend a session in town. I like it very much. I’ll put it ontu my todo-list!
Best thing after reading a lot of submissions: The layout is so thought through. 1st page: Cover and Teaser 2nd page: Background, Idols, NPCs 3rd page: Overworld 4th page: Dungeon No overlap between those whatsoever.
The one thing to push this to P E R F E C T I O N: Switch the Primordal Idols and the Notable NPCs. The Idols-section names a lot of NPCs only introduced later. And with a little format- and text-tweaking the Idols will fit into one column, even avoiding the column-break on the page.
(Also: The text needs a final spell-check, but I don’t think anyone in the jam will hold this against any entry.)