Fun!! Nice sci-fantasy blend. Excellent art, the pointcrawl map incorporated into the cover works great! Clear layout and good use of space. The tiny-planet-as-adventure-location is reminding me of The Little Prince, which is a really funny/interesting touchstone =D. Maybe it's not supposed to be a tiny planet, but that's the impression I got.

Crazy charming comic book style and pulpy space shenanigans. Get zapped!

A cool spacy but not space adventure! Lovely written, illustrated and laid out!

I like that the big theme of a wizard trying to do a good thing leading to a bad thing is mirrored in a smaller way by the will-o-wisps! And perhaps this theme is spun even further by the endings, as the players themselves can only do things with good intentions, but questionable outcomes?

Please resolve one little confusion: at the very beginning there is the bridge and in that area description it is sad in a central area live 45 people. Is this meant to be a central settlement in A1, the shambles in A4 or are the NPCs dotted around over all areas?

I’ll put the module unto my todo-list :)

That cover, and all the illustrations, are absolutely charming. Love the "protection-turned-tragedy" lore. I hope Gully gets to have lots of friends.

I really like how you use colour! The NPCs are also well drawn–in both ways you can use that word.