Two monster, one npc, an handfull location and a couple item, for one of the most insely vibe-dense submission in this jam. So much atmosphere with so little elements, it's a little miracle

Neat straightforward adventure! The observatory mechanics are really interesting. Awesome that it connects to the secret door!

Is the intent that something happen if a player breaks one of the spoken rules?

And a minor thing: There’s no damage type in Shadowdark!

Heya, 

I'm working on organizing a collaboration between all of the Shadowdark creators from Appx. N Jam. If you're interested find me on the SD Discord or msg on bsky.

A thematic, nicely unlinear dungeon. The gathering of hints for the central hub seems like a fitting idea. The hook to fetch the tomes seems… mean :-D

Hi, I love the astrology theme of this adventure. It's smart to use round shape for the adventure map. Also I love how you include constellations on this adventure. When reading it, I'm thinking of if I were to run this, creating puzzles about constellation would be awesome. 

Thos module packs a lot of great ideas (including Star Slime) and looks like it will be fun at the table. The visiual deisgn is clear, even though the font might me a bit too small in print-out. 

I really love the fact that so much of the stuff inside of the observatory is designed to entice you into becoming an unwelcome guest. I for one would be all over each and every thing here that wasn't nailed to the floor. The observatory is a really cool location. The inky blackness seeping in and dripping down as an ooze is really neat as a reflection of the inky black nothing between stars. Great work!

This was a fun read! I would say it's solid. You've got your random encounters, stat blocks. I love the prose in the map descriptions as well. The constellation mechanic encourages exploration and I love that alot. Great job!

Very neat, efficient mechanics. Always love a magician undone by their curiosity trope. One of the most simply readable adventures I've come across. I do wonder if it'd end up being a tad easy for level 2, but that's OK!

The Lunar Mercury is an amazing material idea!

I picture the star slime as having ferromagnetic qualities, or at least looking like those goopy, flow-unnaturally-up-surfaces fluids. 

What a beautiful little jewelbox of stellar activities! I'd love to see this expanded with more art and more detailed hook-stories to bring folks to the site. 

This whole module would work very well with my own Lunar theming in Outel's Edge. 

Love the Horoscope wheel.

An excellent entry from a title that I personally would have found very challenging. 

Very stylish submission!