Everything youm mention annoys me as well and is due to the lack of space. I'll hopefully get an expanded version up by the end of this year. Your ideas for clock effects are awesome, as is the bestiary.
A highly interesting city crawl, based on people and their visions and not on locations. This is gonna be fun at the table. And packing a city generator into the pages is an impressive feat!
A hexcrawl with an interesting theme and a clear vision. Very solid writing, and kudos for the Designer's Note! Many cool ideas to be found in this module. The visual design is crisp.
Mine diving is a fun premise and the module stays true to this theme. The layout is odd, though, with too much white space. The content would profit from expanding (i.e. a random encounter table) and an additional editing pass. Overall lots of good ideas and probably fun for a referee willing to put a bit of work into it.
There's a lot going on, including an extensive backstory (kudos for this bold move). The layout is really interesting, even though the font may be a bit too small. Overall a solid, really shiny-looking module.
I love the visual design, this looks so great! The heartbeat mechanism is a nice way to add time pressure to the session and underscores the theme. A module full of great ideas, this wll be fun to play.
This module is full of great ideas and I love the conection between diary and game module. I guess a referee would have to do a bit of preparation before bringing it to the table, but the ideas and theme are worth the effort.
A module with a clean, minimalistic layout and a tons of cool stuff. The dungeon brings a lot choices and encounters and the module's overall vibe is creepy af. Captures the spirit of old school rpg days very well.
This is peak visual design! I was skeptical because of the relatively sparse text, but the module delivers! The dungeon is great, the overall vibe is as creepy as the title promises, and the Scrabbler ist awesome.
The module packs a lot of content and meshes fantasy and sci-fi tropes in a cool way. The layout and editing need a bit more love, but the overall impression is good.
Thos module packs a lot of great ideas (including Star Slime) and looks like it will be fun at the table. The visiual deisgn is clear, even though the font might me a bit too small in print-out.
The setting is really cool and the mdoule starts with a classic trope. The locatiosn and adversaries are evocative. The layout feeld a bit cramped, but gets all key information delivered.
The writing is clear and the module packed with ideas. Like the notion regardning communication over combat. The layout is minimalistic and a bit cramped, but provides us with a very cool map and cut out tokens. This module is certainly fun at the table.
A highly interesting take on the bilbilcal story, turning D&D into a horror game. The Salt mechanism is excellent, simple-yet-brutal and the the Salt Queen is extremely creepy. Would have loved a map of the city and random encounter table with salty monsters. Anyway, great module!
Clever use of the blood mechanics to progress the module. Interesting locations and enemies and s solid writing style. The visual design is awesome (love the cover art!) and the layout is excellent.
An onslaught of nostalgia and heavy metal vibes, love it! Packed with ideas, this will be fun to play. The visiual design is great, even though the module may be hard to read in print out.
A module packed with action in a doomed city. Love it! The visual design is great and the mechanics to sprad chaos and despair during the gaming session are well designed.
Starting in media res is a clever idea, as is the mapless dungeoncrawl. The module nails down the theme and is surely fun to play. The layout could need more polishing, especially in presentation of key information.
The visual design is amazing and I love the tracker at the bottom of the page. The tables are full of great idea. The whole module looks like being a blast at the table!
Agreed on all points regarding the content - but I had to leave out so many details due to the page restrictions. I'm hopefully coming back later this year to flesh out the module.
I love all the flavourful ideas of this adventure. The 5-room-dungeon is well done and surprisingly complex with the different stages. The layout is crips and the artwork on point.
Solid writing and good catch of the theme. I guess the module requires a bit of work from both sides of the table, but overall it's really cool. Love the layout, especially the Real Time - Play Time explanation.
The layout work is fantastic, even though the module might be hard the read as a print version. The theme is captured extremely well and with a lot of pulp and dark encounters and creatures. This module is ripe with hard decions to make for the players. Love it!
