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If you want to know how to make a lot out of a little, check this. A strong dungeoun finely tuned with its theme. Masterclass use of text and reader premises
Super strong entry here, that hodag art is primo and the writing is straight outta the appendix N, great stuff!
Thank you! Hodag killed it!
Wonderful layout, very readable, good choice with the art. I have no feedback that is not redundant with what others have said. It feels very complete as well. Like definitely could be expanded but very runnable as it is.
Thank you!
A module with a clean, minimalistic layout and a tons of cool stuff. The dungeon brings a lot choices and encounters and the module's overall vibe is creepy af. Captures the spirit of old school rpg days very well.
Thank you!
very solid, very old school vibe. feels similar in quality, atmosphere, and presentation to the first-party DCC stuff i've run. lots of fun stuff to interact with. this ship feels like the one in event horizon lmao just an over the top nightmare zone. the prince and tolliver are two true freaks and the stars of the module tbh - the art and brief descriptions make me excited to bust them out!
some minor notes that had me thinking:
cool stuff overall. the prince's art radiates some truly diabolical energy. gonna be thinking about him for a while
Good catches! That’s what happens when you don’t hire an editor, I suppose! Glad you enjoyed it, regardless!
2nd author's reply: thanks much for the feedback, will definitely be updating in the future and taking these bullet points into account!
A simple layout (only 6 rooms) that still packs a lot of variaty and gameability. Very well done :)
Thank you!
Really love the layout and how well it interacts with Hodag’s art.
Jean did a fantastic job! And Hodag of course knocked it out of the park!
I can’t believe the Prince of Rams would do this!! Great work overall - the newsprint layout and the art are both IMMACULATE, but the bullet points make it a little less readable for me. Finally I would like to formally invite you to make your elves the same elves as the ones from Beneath the Summer Snow, my entry from last year. The settings fit together nicely imo!!!
The single line "Elves: as Troglodyte" made my day: it carries a lot of weight in a few characters. Brilliant concept.
Thank you! Abe had the idea of weird cavemen elves kicking around and this was the perfect outlet!
Such cool art. I like the great risk and great reward aspect of the helmet. Also, the monsters are all unique takes on classics, which is really fun. Sci-Fantasy elements are well done.
Thank you! We love magic items with strings attached!
Excellent submission, capturing the theme brilliantly. We need more femurs of distortion!
Thank you! Who doesn’t love weird magic maces?!
Extremely clean layout, good presentation structure, and a solid adventure. Gameable, good writing, and completely on-theme. No notes! Good job :)
Thank you!!
Everything about this is so good. Yall killed it!!
Thanks pal!!
Cool location! One could slot it right into our little adventure :D
Ooh winter oasis!
Imaginative use of the title prompt. I love the clean layout and the original artwork. Just enough to get the imagination going but not to much to overpower the writing.
Thank you so much!