I like the cast of cute beastfolk. Even the toads seem somewhat redeemable, I would put one “innocent” into the setting to show that not all toads are bandits. The map is more co fusing than helping as the description give much more detail. I’d say the module could have done without it, another nice art piece and additional text to connect the rooms or one, two NPCs.

I don’t quite get how the setup connects to the boss room… does the manatee birth the spiritual leader?

Sweet Florida Vibes! I know exactly the part of the state this is set in - Homosassa Springs and the like. Oh, South Florida.

A perfect environmental encounter area. I love what you've done to really differentiate the amphibians from each other - many people lump frogmen and salas all together and it ain't right!

I wish there was more space, because I'd love more information about the plants and smaller wildlife around each area. I appreciate the bold cover design but rue the information compromise it represents. That has been my sign this whole jam that an entry is top tier - it is bursting with ideas that must be explored in a larger form.

Great little swamp themed romp that you managed to fit a lot of stuff into. I think that by adding a bit more spacing between the bolded lines under your area description, you will really level up the layout. 

I found two typos on p3 under section 4. Jail and Toad Den. crysal vase instead of crystal, and Lad Geb instead of Lady. 

Great visual design! You've made very good use of the public assets you've used. I like the Florida setting too; I don't know that much about the region, but you definitely sell it as a fun place for a fantasy riff.

Nice layout, and enjoyable concept! Very minor quibble, but even for public domain art it's nice to see who it's by rather than "Dead People"!

Ooh, love the idea of being inspired by real-world flora!