I like the overall package! Always cool when there's a mini dungeon included. Would have been a good opportunity to play around with interconectivity a bit more. But otherwise nice!
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More so in the dungeon. It wouldn't need heaps but I feel like the secret door currently doesn't make heaps of sense. An alternative (maybe hidden) entrance or exit would add something too. You want the players to go "ooooh" and feel accomplished if they figure it out. And it should provide an edge or a reward.