So, quick adventure, 20 minutes, in and out, what could go wrong, right?

This does everything asked for in this jam!

This one is vibing 80's. Lovely dungeon and the overall aesthetic of the trifold surely sells this entry, it is simple as it used to be and at the same time very organized and nice to look at, well put togheter and very on theme, very resembling to older modules and adventures. The text is very clear and readable both in colours and b/w version, It's not too litle nor too big. There is enough content for a one-shot and the content is really easy to find across the document.

I also really like the way you used your theme: a great citation to the watcher by J.R.Tolkien in the water at the entry of Moria. Solid submission

Love the style of this trifold, it looks like it was torn out of the back of a rulebook in the 80s. It's funny how the cult is eschewing all worldly possessions but Xar has his silk curtains and fancy goodies. Nice attention to detail.

Love this! It's overall really well designed. I would have preferred the adventure background to be inside the pamphlet rather than on the back, and there are a few awkward phrases here and there, but overall, nice work. 

Gosh I love reading this entry, it looks so pulpy. Everything looks solid here! The trifold really works! However, as much as I love reading this entry, I can't help but feel like the adventure is rather "safe" side.  I think if you pump the weirdness even further, this would've been an even awesomer adventure. However, it's fantastic regardless! I had a good time reading this. Bravo!

Nice trifold and mono-color design!

A few favorite things: 

• The Seer's Path encounters nicely provide a sense of a journey and introduce elements of the adventuring site
• Odds determining where Xar or other characters will be found
• Meaty treasure!