I’m coming in biased on this one, I couldn’t possibly be critical of an adventure that employs the amazing word ‘ducal’ as often as my own adventure, Beneath the Muckfort.
I’m not going to mince words, this adventure kicks ass. You have crammed so much adventure into this one, but the pages don’t feel crammed at all. The terseness of your adventure writer’s prose is singing to me here, so much is communicated with only a few words.
If you’ve given any thought to ordering prints of these (A6 full color booklets are cheap as all hell and I’ve got a paper stock secret for them that makes them feel premium), you should reach out. There are some copy editing things that jumped out at me during my read through that I would love to help out with (if you’re interested, of course.)